Sunday, November 28, 2010

Cause/ Effect Essay

Kosuke Shiraiwa
Writing 625
High School Dropout

             In the United States, the rate of high school dropout is getting lower little by little. The rate which was 15.0% in 1970 reached 8.7% in 2008. The status dropout rates in America are divided into three races; 4.8% for White, 9.9% for Black, and 18.3% for Hispanic. However, you can know this number is still very high when it’s compared with Japan. Because America has various races, the situation is different from Japan, though. In Japan, the rate of high school dropout is 2.3%. Even 2.3% is told the social problem in Japan because it’s still very high rate. According to researches, high school dropout can result from academic, monetary, and social factors.
             Recent research indicates one of the causes as high school dropouts comes from academic factor. Mainly it is about study. When the students can’t catch up with their class, they drop out of their high school. Some students encounter the difficulties about study. For example, they cannot get enough score on important test. Of course, teachers try to support students in many schools to prevent their dropouts. However, some schools actually don’t attempt to improve the situation so hard. It can be improved by both students and teachers. Also if they cannot get enough units to graduate in three years as usual, they are likely to choose dropout, rather than choose studying to repeat one more year. This seems to happen to lower-level school more than upper-level school.
             The second cause occurs from social factor. First of all, if their income is low, they may not be able to pay their tuition. In this sense, students can’t do anything basically. If students try to earn to pay money to support their family, they lose time to study. It leads academic issue eventually. Student also leaves school because of trouble for interpersonal relationship. As one of the example, here is a bully. Some students lose a position in school by being left out of a group, for example. Furthermore, family issue, such as pregnancy and early marriage, can be one of cause to drop out high school. As a result of pregnancy and early marriage, they can’t attend class any more. This factor is very serious currently because it depends on students whether they deal with well.
             These two factors increase high school dropouts; consequently, following two effects come up. It is an increase of people who get fewer opportunities in employment and criminal. Besides, the research reveals that the less high school dropouts are, the fewer criminals are, too.
             If a student drops out of his high school through halfway, he will have very hard time to get a job. It’s because currently a high school diploma is becoming a prerequisite for a number of entry-level jobs. Moreover, if you are even planning to go to college or university, you need to have a high school diploma first. Therefore, you can know that a high school diploma is very important as a standard. Even though two people have similar ability, a person who has dropped out of school is more likely to be unemployed than a high school graduate. They are not believed well unfortunately. If they are able to find work, it will be relatively low paying and offer little opportunity for promotion. They are more likely to be fired than graduates. Moreover, they will still have hard time even after they get a job. In this way, when they can’t have opportunity to earn enough money to live or nurture their family, some problem will certainly happen.
             According to statistics, three-quarters of inmates in state prison in the United States are high school dropouts. In the case of inmates serving time in federal institutions, the percentage is 59 percent. More than half of criminal are the person who dropped out of school. An individual who didn't finish high school is 3.5 times more likely to be arrested at some point during their lifetime. Therefore, you may be able to say that increase of high school dropouts makes more criminal. The researches indicate the rate of criminal was 0.041% and dropout was10.9% in 2000. Otherwise, in 2008 both of rates decreased, then the rate of criminal was 0.038 and dropout was 8.0%. Of course, the rate of dropouts is not all factors to decide the rate of criminal. However, it seems to be correct that a high school dropout affects the rate of criminal.
             As you can see, high school dropouts lead some serious issues to society. Hence, the rate of high school dropouts should be improved as soon as possible. If this situation is improved and the rate of high school dropouts, the country can save money very well because the country has to spend much money and time to search, arrest, and incarcerate criminals. If the overall graduation rate for high school students were to increase by only one percent, it would result in a $1.4 billion savings in the cost of keeping offenders incarcerated. Also, it will prevent bad cycle of life; for example, broken family and too much debt led by low payment or unemployment. In order to improve it, students themselves who seem to drop out of a high school and people who surround them have to consider this situation more seriously. They don’t realize that they will be the person who leads such a devastating life by dropout of high school. These days, though the situation is getting better little by little, it is still in poor shape. Improvement of high school dropouts is good for not only student themselves, but also whole society.

Thursday, November 11, 2010

11/7/10


              I went swimming and climbing with my house mate and two friends. First, we went to the pool at main campus whose length is twenty five meters one way. It was very good because nobody was there, only us, and it costs only three dollars. Although outside of the water was cold because of outside pool, the temperature of the water was not bad; it was about eighty degrees. Three of us were a swimmer when we were young. Therefore we competed by several styles. My house mate and I are boys and my friend is a girl, so we boys got handicap for her, which was to let her start five meters ahead. In almost all of competitions, I couldn’t cover five meters handicap although I swam hard. Then, I felt my body became old. However, it was so fresh and very exciting because I didn’t swim for two months. As a total, we enjoyed swimming for two hours. Then we went climbing after lunch. It was the first time to try climbing for me. It looked easy, but it was, in fact, so difficult. My hands got painful because I had to grab something to climb the wall. I could finish only low level wall.
I like swimming and I got new experience of climbing that day. Hence, it was really great day for me I got muscular pain on whole body, though.

Thursday, October 21, 2010

Favorite Experience in America

One of my favorite experiences in America is visiting Las Vegas by car with my friends. On the freeway to Las Vegas we got a flat tire unfortunately. In fact, that was the first time to get flat tire, so there was nothing to laugh at and I was very anxious. We exchanged spoiled tire with a spare tire to go to a gas station. Fortunately it could endure running to a gas station. We ordered a new tire and waited for about two hours. Then, we got ready finally. At that time, I thought I was sorry about bad start for my friends I invited. After that we got to Las Vegas without any troubles. Then, we enjoyed luxurious time in Las Vegas. Although it was one of the most terrible memories, it is also impressive memory in a sense. I don’t want to make that kind of memory again, though. Now I’d like to apologize and say thank you to my friends. I could reconfirm I have good friends through that trip.

Tuesday, October 5, 2010

California Weather

Kosuke Shiraiwa
625 Journal Writing
3/10/10
              The weather in California is very different from that of Kyoto. It is much drier than in Kyoto. Here is a good example to understand the difference between the weather of California and weather of Kyoto. It rained just several times in six months in California. In Kyoto we can see the rain many times especially in June. It means Kyoto is more humid than in California. This weather is terrible in summer. It is not only hot but also humid; on the other hand, California is just hot, so for instance, I can feel cool when I go under the tree in summer. I prefer California weather to that of Kyoto.